Without
Resistance
We all fall
At the
Same rate,
My love,
I’ll meet you
At the bottom
Of everything,
Broken open,
Spilling hope.
@Aphelion i like this poem but we will fall at the same rate with gravity too. that guy had to fight the pope. there was like a whole thing.
@Forbearance I changed it to “resistance” because you are 100% right. Thank you
Good change, to avoid a distracting snag, but at risk of abusing still another physical quantity, the real power of this poem is in the final lines.
I'll stop short of calling hope a truly strong force, lest a brawl break out among the physicists looking on, but not all truths need be spoken.
This may use the language of physics. But it is about far more fundamental, personal matters. Keep the hope alive.